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You Make Me Feel

You make me feel like the first sipped of coffee at a café, The concluding mouthwatering bite at a buffet, The smartest predator and the scrumptious prey, You make me feel like the world would end, if I lose you in some way, The wise psychic that forever knows the right thing to say, A kid feeling the joyous fun to play, You make me feel extra special when you spray, Your love on me as if it was a can that say, “The way she makes you feel can’t be felt by anyone anyway.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2011 4:19:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Darian. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2011 6:52:00 PM
Lovdely write well penned on You make me feel, Darian
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