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You Made Your Bed

You made your bed, now lie in it devoid of warmth and care between the crumpled, dirty sheets Pretend that I am there You made your bed, in crazed haste and hoped to cover all the memories that you had of me but now you hope I'll call You made your bed now feel regret For love like mine's unknown You shiver as you toss and turn her lust is all she's shown You made your bed for her instead and yet you burn for me you thought a better beauty queen gave heightened ecstacy You made your bed, in thorns blood red she sleeps and lets you burn You dream of me, my constancy Once sated, now you yearn You made your bed, let it be said I made my own bed, too the man who loves the all of me sleeps soundly, not like you. The bed I've made, with roses laid Is where he longs to be its sheets on fire with his desire he loves and feasts on me Sleep in your bed, where love is dead Weep for the love you miss and see me in your lucid dreams bathed in my lover's kiss Eileen Manassian Please...read poetry for the sake of poetry and refrain from making inferences that are not called for. I enjoyed writing this piece as I thought of that saying....You made your bed, now you must lie in it. I've written on proverbs and poetical themes. I enjoy the challenge.

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Date: 8/25/2023 12:29:00 PM
It's a reality for some. And a tragity for others. Of course I could never write this because being a Man, We're unforgiving. And when we say "You made your bed now lie in it" No argument it's the end.
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Date: 2/16/2020 10:16:00 AM
what a talent you are..thank you
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Date: 3/13/2018 2:07:00 PM
You have treated this subject before, Eileen, and yet you still manage to give it a brand new touch. Love all the content, especially the last three stanzas! As usual you excel in smooth flowing rhyme. Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2018 2:17:00 PM
Dear Paul...these are the comments I like to read. I love it when fellow poets read the poem for what it is and do not make personal references. Thank you...dear. I miss you. Hope all is well. Love to the family.
Date: 3/13/2018 9:33:00 AM
BOOM BABY! Eilee your words are a torch that illuminate the heart and mind. Awesomeness!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2018 2:18:00 PM
Shadow....what a lovely avatar. :) I wish I had full lips like yours. Thank you for liking this poem. These are the comments that bring me joy....comments about my poems. Hugs
Date: 3/12/2018 6:26:00 PM
Oh, I love this, Eileen. I wrote one a long time ago going off the expression: you made your bed, now lie in it, but I took mine a different direction. This is so cool.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, dear. Inspiration gets us in different ways. I'm glad you liked this piece. Hope all is well. Hugs
Date: 3/12/2018 2:31:00 PM
You write this type of poetry with just the right amount of Ooh la la!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2018 2:19:00 PM
:) Thanks, Richard. You always support me in ways that bring me joy. :)
Date: 3/12/2018 6:03:00 AM
A beautiful poem ... both the situations brought out rhythmically ...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thank you. I tend more toward rhythmic poetry than free verse. I appreciate the visit.
Date: 3/11/2018 10:22:00 AM
No mercy...At least you released it...good line..." You've made your bed"...All the best Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2018 10:24:00 AM
Arturo, kindly go back and read my footnote. I seems I need to write a disclaimer. It's sad that there is a necessity for it here. Blessings.
Date: 3/11/2018 9:52:00 AM
A masterpiece, I agree with all... Mick
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2018 10:12:00 AM
Thank you for the visit, Mick.
Date: 3/11/2018 8:28:00 AM
Love this, Eileen! It feels and flows like an old folk song, the repetition works really well.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thanks, Agnes. The poem basically write itself. There was a place or two where I struggled with finding the right word, but other than that...it was pretty easy writing. I liked taking that well known phrase and changing it. :) Thanks for the visit.
Date: 3/11/2018 6:19:00 AM
Hope he lives a life of regret Eileen. A very sensual write covering the winner and the loser - the woman being the winner. Loved it...Mariaxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2018 8:28:00 AM
Hi, dear...thanks for the visit. I enjoy writing this type of poetry. Can you imagine that revenge is not listed as one of the topics? Hope Poetry Soup looks into it. Hugs and thanks for reading. It is much appreciated.

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