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You Loved

YOU LOVED You loved me most. I won’t want to hurt you. No way, I left. My heart yearned for else one. We two lovers wedded. One year just passed. Deceived. I left, searched for, wept for in vain to get back you. I wish to love you, Dear! Two Syllables per line First Place 12/08/16 Duplex Contest by Jan Allison

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Date: 12/11/2016 9:57:00 AM
Great poem on a difficult contest! Congrats! :-)
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Date: 12/11/2016 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement ...
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Date: 12/11/2016 4:57:00 AM
Hi Anisha, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/10/2016 11:55:00 PM
Anisha, Congratulations! Great duplex :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:02:00 PM
Hi Anisha, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:53:00 PM
Congrats, Anisha.
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:28:00 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Anisha - I had asked for the title to be Duplex but didn't penalise you for this as the poem was good:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2016 1:18:00 PM
Oh. A heart in bleeding. nice write.
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