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You loss me

You took my feelings and casted them aside. As you played your games with my mind. Broke my heart and tore it apart. I believed your words that flowed from your heart. What for? I am asking myself now? Just to be made the fool in everyone’s eyes. Well I am here to tell you to move on. You have already out stayed your welcome. Never will I cry another tear drop for you. Never will your name touch my lips again. You hurt me once and that’s all you get I will not fall back into your web of lies and guilt. You loss this friendship along with me. I hope your games were worth it in the end.

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 4:27:00 PM
    I think I may know? Hmmmm?

  1. Date: 8/19/2012 7:53:00 AM
    soup mail...

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 11:05:00 AM
    soup mail....

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 10:53:00 AM
    penetrating piece that will surely drive this person away.. you have the courage to stand strong and we are here for you, cory!... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 10:36:00 AM
    Cory, Love the message here. Taking back your power is the best revenge! Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 3:49:00 PM
    SOUP MAIL > Cory :) // Anne-Lise :)

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 8/19/2012 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    (((((HUGS )))))
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/17/2012 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Bravo, well done !!!!! <3
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Unbelievable that this allowed again. This loser is back, wow. Hey Soup how much crap does this piece of garbage have to pull before he is yanked for good. Stand strong Cory you have many "real" friends on here. Luv Michael

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:40:00 AM
    Copy all the crap he sends you,Cory.Send it over to TPS and let them read through it.Keep in touch my friend.Hugs,Arild

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 8/17/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    will do...
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:31:00 AM
    Thank you to everyone for their kind words of encouragement and suggestions to get rid of him for good... cory

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Cory great write, as Arild says we know who it is, remember rules and regulations are on your side not his..we all make mistakes it does not mean we should be persecuted for them! have lots of friends here, stand tall...David soup mail..

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 8/17/2012 11:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for having my back through this mess..
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Yep,we know just too well who this lil`coward is,and am VERY surprised that he`s still on this site.One thing is that he came after several male writers here on PS,but it seems he now goes after the female members too..threatens them to silence! What a low life little coward he is,ey? He plays with your feelings,then it is all about sorry him blah,blah,blah..Don`t belive a single word he`s saying,in the end of the line he`s just a cheap little coward:-) Hugs,Arild

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 8/17/2012 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 10:39:00 AM
    A evil wolf in sheep`s clothing. - he is (sorry)a asshole - Take care my friend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 9:16:00 AM
    Im sorry this man preyed on you when you were vulnerable Cory, when all you needed was a friend. Love your friend xxx

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 8/17/2012 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    he'll get his in the end.. Just wait your game is soon to end.
  1. Date: 8/17/2012 5:04:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Cory. I hope to be able to read more of it soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 2:36:00 PM
    been there done that. some how we all must pay the price of this lesson.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 11:38:00 AM
    This also works for a woman too! She had hurt me so bad that I finally found the true love of my life, my wife! Sometimes going through this strengthens your heart and allows you to see what is out there and to eventually find that special one! What a fantastic write Cory! I really enjoyed this free verse! Great Work!!

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 8/16/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks russell :)
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:55:00 AM
    thats a real good poem and i know how it feels to be hurt.

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:36:00 AM
    This is sad...but perhaps a lesson learned? I don't have any idea of whom you speak, Cory. But let it go....don't give it a second thought. Good writing !

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:23:00 AM
    Oh sad this one and sorry you have been hurt, do you mean met as in person or on electronically ?xx

    long Avatar cory long
    Date: 8/16/2012 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    most people know him through online...
  1. Date: 8/16/2012 9:18:00 AM
    Many people have met this person I write about and now I have seen who he really is? So take a tip from a friend stay away from this man...