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you let me down

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you let me down

I tried not to allow myself
to fall for you
to trust you
to like you this much
but here I am unable to sleep
because all I can think of is you
and how you are not here besides me
I allowed myself to fall for you
I let myself open myself up to you
its my own fault
that I'm now so broken
because you built me up to let me down
I should have seen it coming
and kept my heart locked

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  1. Date: 12/17/2010 7:05:00 PM
    take as a leaf of life this phase would pass give you a rebirth to think the next time around keep open your eyes for someone would come with their heart fresh with love do not let the past catch up with u there..sunkan

  1. Date: 12/17/2010 6:21:00 AM
    Nice passionate thoughts on the loneliness you have penned, chamonique