You Left Me

YOU LEFT ME! Why did you leave? You left me in the cold You left me broken and bruised You took my heart Ripped it in two And threw it away Like you did nothing wrong What was it? Did I do something wrong? Was I not enough? Did I not care enough? Love you enough? NO! I loved you! I gave you my heart I did everything I could... To make you care... To make you love me... To make you stay... You cheated You lied You didn't care Couldn't you see that you were hurting me! Then you left me There in the cold Left me broken and bruised And then you come crawling back! When I'm finally happy When I finally feel safe It's too late for you You missed your chance And me... I'm happier than I've ever been I have someone who cares about me Loves me He fixed my broken heart That you gave me... He would never cheat Lie Or leave me in the cold Broken and bruised Just like you did You left me...

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Jai Bankson

Date: 7/1/2016 12:37:00 PM

Good for you!It's summer,you don't need a coat!!Hope to read some more.Take care.Jai

Skat A

Date: 6/30/2016 10:25:00 AM

Lexi, cutting write, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Lexi Davis
Date: 7/1/2016 8:03:00 AM

thank you very much :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/29/2016 1:04:00 PM

Hi, Lexi.... I love this style so smuch awesome free verse...I have a friend named Caleb... Who writes in this style and format. I'm giving you a high 7 for this post.... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/29/2016 1:04:00 PM

PS...Lexi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lexi Davis
Date: 6/30/2016 8:29:00 AM

thank you very much. i love how supporting and positive you guys are. not many people are to me, so this means a lot thank you :) and the reason i started writing poems is so i can show my emotions through writing. and what do you mean by "constructive criticism?" and thank you again :)

Savanah Hester

Date: 6/29/2016 12:15:00 PM

Very beautiful and meaningful

Lexi Davis
Date: 6/30/2016 8:22:00 AM

thank you :)