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You Left Me

You Left me in our house Covered in blood and dust The only friend I have now is a mouse You couldnt have know I was still there Just lying there under the stairs I thought about the blast that sent me there Covered in blood and dust now as you allways said un to dust I say now i must go to sway to and fro Into the friendly hands of death Goodbye old friend Sarah Beth

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/8/2015 4:06:00 PM

Hi Ben, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/8/2015 3:12:00 PM

Ben, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Emile Pinet

Date: 2/5/2015 1:11:00 PM

An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page. Emile.