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You Keep Me Hot

I like the way you light my fire and suck on me until you get hotter I like the way you hold me between your fingers and place me tightly between your teeth I like the way you breathe when you’re with me. I don't like when you pluck me or invite someone else to suck on me. You keep me hot and that means a lot, you make me feel special every time you relax or fall asleep with me. Sometimes people say I'm dangerous and I'm just a black cloud. When you twist your feet on top of me I feel like you want to get rid of me. I can tell you love torching me but I can help you relax, We can go places together, we can cook together, drink and burn stuff together and most of all we can die together. I am a cigarette and you can smell me anywhere but every time you put a light under me I'll make sure cancer becomes a big part of some ones life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2016 10:40:00 AM
Sarah, awesome poem. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:20:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sarah. I stopped smoking 2 years ago.Love, Carol
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