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You In Moonlight

You in Moonlight My precious one My treasured you You are a gem You brightly shine Shine like stars Shine like diamonds Diamonds are forever Diamonds are a girl’s best friend Friend to lean on Friend and lover Lover and my everything Lover from my dreams Dreams come true Dreams of flying Flying into your arms Flying through space and time Time for loving Time of longing Longing for embraces Longing for passionate kisses Kisses like mellow wine Kisses so divine Divine like an angel’s breath Divine like holy fire Fire purifies Fire ignites passions Passions unleashed Passions blend Blend becoming one Blend like melodies Melodies of devotion Melodies of love Love from Cupid’s arrow Love from hearts of red Red for my Valentine Red for being insane Insane for my beloved Insane with joy Joy discovering rainbows Joy for living Living in the moment Living in ecstasy Ecstasy from nights of pleasure Ecstasy and sheer delight Delight finding the Holy Grail Delight in the moonlight Moonlight in your soul Moonlight in your heart Heart… Soul… 01-25-2017 Contest: Valentine's Blitz Sponsor: D.W. Rodgers Placement: 3rd

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/16/2017 8:43:00 PM

You have written a beautiful poem.I have enjoyed reading this poem so much .I did not want it to end. have a nice evening my friend.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/17/2017 8:30:00 AM

It is such a pleasure to receive your heartwarming compliments! Many thanks, my friend! Have a beautiful weekend. Pandita

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/13/2017 7:33:00 PM

Wow! A whirlwind of wondrous poetic expression my dear friend Pandita. Such a brilliantly and beautifully written poem. Glorious imagery and lush lovely lines of fantastic thoughts, words phrases that combine to make for a thrilling and exhilarating read. Excellent and very much enjoyed my talented friend! Best wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/14/2017 8:14:00 AM

My dear friend, you always have a way of brightening up my day with your wonderful complimentary words! Thank you ever so much! Hugs and best wishes! Pandita

Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 11/12/2017 2:10:00 AM

Very beautiful poem. Have a wonderful day.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/13/2017 12:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Harshita! You brought a smile to my face! Best wishes. Pandita

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/25/2017 4:09:00 PM

A well written blitz, Pandita! Your lines are full of energy. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/25/2017 7:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim, for swinging by to congratulate me on this piece! I really appreciate it your kind, complimentary words. Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

John Hamilton

Date: 2/20/2017 2:22:00 PM

Great write Pandita, few can pull off a blitz poem, but you did it so well.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/20/2017 6:54:00 PM

Hi John, thank you very much for visiting and leaving your kind superlative compliments which I very much appreciate! All the best, my friend! Pandita

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 2/3/2017 11:01:00 AM

I like your style on this poem reminds me of my own x well done x

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/4/2017 7:33:00 AM

Aaaaa! Many thanks for your visit and complimentary words! Best regards. Pandita

Devin Michaels-Bishop

Date: 1/30/2017 10:16:00 AM

Wow, this is an Awesome poem. It is written very beautifully. Since I'm new to writing poetry, I haven't learned all the different styles of poetry. I will certainly have to give this one a try. Thanks so much for allowing everyone to read your poem.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/30/2017 1:43:00 PM

Hi Devin, I truly appreciate your wonderful compliments! Thank you so very much, my friend! Yes, do try this form - it's really fun! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/30/2017 7:57:00 AM

Great form Pandita with a great ending.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/30/2017 8:15:00 AM

Hi Phil, thank you very much for visiting and leaving your kind compliments which I very much appreciate! All the best, my friend! Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 1/29/2017 11:47:00 AM

lovely Blitz, Pandita, :) thank you so much for your visit. Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/30/2017 8:15:00 AM

Hi Eve, it's always lovely to hear from you and I really appreciate your kind, supportive words. Thank you so much! Hugs. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2017 8:45:00 AM

Hi Pandita, I enjoyed your beautiful poem of romance...Well done......GL in the contest

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/27/2017 10:32:00 AM

Hi Joseph, I am so delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you my friend for your kind words of praise. Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

Tim Smith

Date: 1/26/2017 1:13:00 PM

Awww, you did a great job Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/27/2017 7:49:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Tim! You brought a smile to my face! Pandita

James Horn

Date: 1/26/2017 8:20:00 AM

PS, You will have to read my latest poem. I forgot what was sweeter than wine in the song. Do you remember? What do you think about all of this illegal voting. Pure hogwash I am sure. JH

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/26/2017 10:19:00 AM

Kisses sweeter than wine:-)! Illegal voting - "Hogwash" - my sentiments exactly! Thank you my friend for stopping by! Have a great day! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 1/25/2017 5:45:00 PM

Beautiful romantic piece and excellent Blitz! I really enjoyed this lovely piece! Best wishes in the contest. Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/25/2017 5:49:00 PM

Hi Kika, thank you so much for the lovely compliments, my friend! Hugs. Pandita