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You Have Lost

You cant take this from me These feelings that i have You are trying to deceive me You can have my memory I will be remembered You have lost. by kate mcnaughton.

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John Freeman

Date: 10/1/2009 9:48:00 AM

Feelings, one of the few things that still belong to the individual, love's way of preserving one's own soul, of this be assured. God's gift to humanity is stable. Sincerely, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2009 1:42:00 PM

No one should be able to take away good feelings, Kate. If someone is trying to deceive you, they are the ones who should be forgotten. You "will be remembered" for your feelings and your kind heart. It's nice to meet another Scottish poet here. James Fraser of Edenboro is one of the Soup's best! Love, Carolyn

Danny Nunn

Date: 9/28/2009 8:46:00 PM

Great write, I like the way that you write, plain and simple, but to the point? Thank you for reviewing all of my poems today, that was nice of you. The one "Angel Trail", I wrote for my Dad when he was killed in a car accident...even though the poem is not that way..His last words were, "Don't worry about me, the angels are here to take me home". Keep writing, you are doing mighty fine...thanks Danny

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2009 3:21:00 PM

Interesting form. Keep writing. Sara

P Sheart

Date: 9/28/2009 2:55:00 PM

Hi Kate I really enjoyed this one! It's true we never forget.....Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Later Love Light Truth Patricia