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You have left Images catapult My morning has broken like bird wings Falling straight from heaven to be eaten by ants Of desires,memories, shards of past, moisture of kisses Sad sun is moving like heavy moths, an unblinking stare. to the west end 1.Morning Has Broken--- Cat Stevens Contest Name ENCHANTMENT THROUGH A PRISM Sponsor nette onclaud POET: Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 18 th December, 2014

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Date: 12/24/2014 10:12:00 AM
Oh, this is a "WOW" piece! Rajat the imagery is amazing! I really enjoyed this beautiful work! Kika
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Date: 12/18/2014 11:57:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Rajat! Sad sun moving like heavy moths...that is a great line! Hugs, Rhonda
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/19/2014 1:30:00 AM
Hi Rhonda Love-rajat
Date: 12/18/2014 4:23:00 PM
I'm enchanted. :) Love that song, Rajat. You used lovely imagery in this. :)
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/19/2014 1:31:00 AM
Love Eileen-rajat

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