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You Had Her Out Too Late

Young man, you took my daughter out on a date. However, I told you don’t keep her out too late. She didn’t come home until the early morning light. That was crude of you and not a bit right. You are the epitome of an uncouth fool. My daughter was too tired to make it into school. Bad news followed that was a lot more than enough: You got a little fresh with her and a bit too rough. Don’t you know this town enforces a curfew? Staying out late was a very foolish thing to do. Never ever let me see you back around here. This place is off limits to you! Do I make myself clear?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/20/2013 10:46:00 PM
some of us would have just punched his lights out....nice rhyme Robert
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Robert Pettit
Date: 2/21/2013 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for reviewing this one, Francine. I was beginning to think nobody liked this entry.

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