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You Got Me Wired

I browse through all but it is with you I fall Unplanned spot and plot, I dared took the shot You lit my fire, you got me wired You're so smart you got me from fresh start Your creative art painted joy in my heart You lit my fire, you got me wired Your heartwarming style sweetened my bile Like the lily in the Nile, easily you free my smile You lit my fire, you got me wired Beyond beauty are your thoughts All of them got me caught I tried to blot even fought Still, you lit my fire, you got me wired Thank God it's you I befall Into good hands I thrall No committed foul Since you touched my soul You lit my fire, you got me wired (C) olive eloisa 8:11 pm May 10, 2014 Contest Name: a poem you have not entered in a poetry soup contest #1 Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A 9th Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2014 4:08:00 PM

it's not my fault you are on everyone's winning list... Hugs, Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2014 5:24:00 AM

Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:53:00 PM

Thank you for your awesome COmment sir,. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2014 10:17:00 PM

cool title for this one. Reminded me of the end of the movie Grease, where John travolta sings to Olivia Newton John: Electrifying!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:53:00 PM

Thank you for that electrifying comment,, :D

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2014 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi:) cu later

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/16/2014 2:24:00 AM

Lovely write Olive ! Enjoyed the read ,, congrats on wonderful win !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:52:00 PM

thank you.. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2014 12:16:00 AM

OLIVE, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Linda.. :)

Eric Schojan

Date: 5/13/2014 4:39:00 PM

love the style and flow, the rhyming scheme, it's all very unique and i love the story it tells as well, thanks for sharing!! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/14/2014 2:21:00 AM

thank you very much for taking the time to come and read :) GBU

David Williams

Date: 5/12/2014 8:59:00 AM

Olive I like this a lot...David

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/12/2014 3:52:00 PM

thanks DAvid.. :D

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/10/2014 10:54:00 PM

I am glad I do all of this!!!! LOL Seriously, a very lovely poem, you just keep getting better and better!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 1:54:00 AM

Thanks much for the comments..:) well appreciated..:)

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/10/2014 9:18:00 PM

Woot Woot. I think you are awesome when you are wired, you have such a fun spirit, I love it. Keep smiling chicky. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Cadarah..:) GBU...hugs:)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/10/2014 7:02:00 PM

Wow is the first thing I want to say, you've blow me out of the part and down the road girl lol man I can tell your wired, putting this on paper pen to ink you've made great choses is what I think thanks for sharing your high tone approach to poetry with me tonight, you've got me inspired maybe even wired, lol just kidding take care cheri lol

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Cherl..:) yours as well a beauty.. Gbu

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2014 4:28:00 PM

- A really beautiful poem Olive - it captured my heart - I wish you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 8:53:00 AM

Thanks much Anne Lise..:) hugs..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/10/2014 2:50:00 PM

Hi Olive_eloi.....this is great! Flows from the heart, sincere and touching. The same thing happens to me, so I can relate. [This goes in my favs.] God bless you...// paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thanks much Paul..:) GBU will cu latent...:)

David Williams

Date: 5/10/2014 2:47:00 PM

Olive I like this and the refrain is excellent, it would also do very well in couplet form....David

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 8:47:00 AM

Thanks so much David..:) appreciate your comments

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/10/2014 12:56:00 PM

Olive, as always you've conjured another bright poem that really makes me envious. LOL My world lacks sunshine and I look to others' worlds for warmth. I run to your poems to uplift my spirit.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2014 8:52:00 AM

Thanks Jake.. I too am uplifted when I read yours..:) gbu