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You Foolishly Once Thought You Had It Bad a Collaboration With Robert Lindley

When tons of doom filled nights fall upon your head, embers glow fierce and fires burn unabated. Recalling her last breath and wish you were dead in poem's last line, you've been beat and castrated. From the heavens, a voice thunders out dire threats about loses and late breakfasts without eggs. Fumbling about, looking to hedge your foolish bets, you drink your cold coffee, down to bitter, burnt dregs. On waking you find dawns hammer truly fell. Last nights burns are reminders of your tortured life. You stumble and look up from pits of dark raging hell, recounting now the true reasons you lost your wife. Your alarm clock chimes out vulgar curses at you and your dark house bids you leave by peals at noon. You think of the ancient, sad wicked dreams, too, as night falls with it's huge wretched lucent moon. Dreaming of hungry tigers eating your new boots. your house perched atop two tall adjoining trees. A hunter fires; it is not a tiger that he shoots. Second angry wife cuts your legs off at the knees Metaphor amputations are so savagely sever. Your spirit cries out I must flee, tiger is near. The tiger roars with laughter, I own all your pain. Second lioness purrs with abject contempt and disdain Your old slaughtered heart bleating faint cries out. Memories tainted and dreams coercing a shout. In abyss of regret the famished tiger dines. You struggle to cope, tree sways breaking it's vines. What of taunting lioness who's false words defame? Half muted stutters quivering lips murmur blame. Muttered niceties in deep with disgust feigned. Tiger haunting your dreams, as King it truly reigns. Will you take a stand your courage regained? Can you bare the cost, can you bear the pain? Be strong take back what your past gains. Clean the slate wipe away the shameful stains. Climb up from the depth of hells dark pits. Replace dawns hammer with soft cotton mitts. Let satisfied lioness purr, hunt the raging tiger. Be happy, be proud of regaining your swagger. WRITTEN WITH ONE OF THE BEST POETS I KNOW. ROBERT LINDLEY FOR THE CHALLENGE ON HIS BLOG. THANK YOU ROBERT FOR CHOOSING TO WORK WITH ME.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/31/2018 2:25:00 PM
Hello Edward and Robert, you both did a lovelyy job writing this poetry. Have a nice day my friends.
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/31/2018 10:37:00 PM
Thank you Darlene for you wonderful comment it was fun writing with Robert. Have a good night and a wonderful day tomorrow. {:-)
Date: 1/6/2018 1:21:00 AM
A FAV..
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/6/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thank you Robert for the fav. placement and for the opportunity to work with you.
Date: 1/6/2018 1:20:00 AM
I am so sorry for coming here so late to comment. I thought I had already done so my friend. A pleasure composing with you and your verses were very fine. Thanks.
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/6/2018 7:01:00 PM
No need to apologize Robert I understand completely my friend.
Date: 1/5/2018 9:47:00 PM
A fantastic collaboration Ed and Rob! Yes very true, Rob is one of the best here. I enjoyed it very much! Hugs and smiles :)
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/6/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you Kina I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. And thank you for your awesome comment your pleasant word always fill my heart with joy. Gentle hugs and warm smiles to you my dear soup friend.
Date: 1/1/2018 7:51:00 PM
Well done with the blending of your dark thoughts with Roberts, Edward.
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/1/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Lin for your kind comment. It was a joy working with Robert.
Date: 1/1/2018 4:07:00 PM
Wow, gentleman, this is a wonderful collaboration. Very well written and the lines intriguing. Great flow and rhyme.
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Edward Mccall
Date: 1/1/2018 5:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Rhoda Robert and I greatly appreciate your kind and encouraging comment. May you have a blessed evening. {:-)

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