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You Flew the Kite

A kite is soaring through the air I see your laughter, but I can't hear except for something in the dark that sparks a light from yesteryear The reel unwinds, on fragile wings No sound of wind, no sound of you A spartan view upon the screen that's faded, frail and sputtering My throat is tight. You flew the kite... The three of you, run down the hill Your innocence, the timeless dance… To watch you now, I feel the sun A cherished piece from yesterday... My throat is tight. You flew the kite No whispered voice or word is said, No measure of a favorite song Just the silent movie, chattering with bluebird sounds that tag along in harmony with treasures, found.. You trampled grass one August day and childhood quickly swept away into the world, just like the kite You soared so high, that I've lost sight My throat is tight.... You flew the kite A summer breeze has stirred your hair Your smiles, carefree, are unaware that childhood is a fleeting game that takes you far away The sun is like a tangerine It blinds me from the serpentine Your kite is lost to summer's sky As I was standing by I smiled and watched you fly the kite And wonder where the years have gone How fast you grew. Now, who are you?... My throat is tight.... You flew the kite ______________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/25/2014 8:11:00 AM
Wonderful write Carrie! U hv an amazing pen my dear! congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/24/2014 9:58:00 AM
A sad memory ....well penned....Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/23/2014 8:49:00 PM
Great sad write! Does that make any sense, it must cause you did it. Congratulations on your well earned win.
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Date: 9/23/2014 3:38:00 PM
A beautiful and sad story..congrats Tim
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:12:00 PM
You fly the Kite...Hmm!Splendid write,Carrie..Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:49:00 AM
Wow Carrie....how sad that childhood has to disappear into the depths of the mind; our children grow...fast...and they will never be the same again. Love the contrast between the children & kite. Touchingly beautiful. Congrats on your podium finish in Linda's contest. // paul
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Date: 9/23/2014 7:52:00 AM
Very touching verse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/23/2014 6:03:00 AM
Very sad and touchy write. congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:33:00 AM
this brought a lump to my throat. many congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:54:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on this beautiful poem. It is heartbreaking how fast they grow up.
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Date: 9/22/2014 11:25:00 PM
awesome Carrie, brought a lump to my throat, love this one
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Date: 9/22/2014 9:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie :) enjoy your win, and stop by my latest blog "We Will Never Know" if you have time, or if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/8/2013 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie.... so deep....SKAT
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Date: 10/8/2013 4:58:00 AM
Ah yes my friend...So sad yet so beautiful and where does the time go? Congrats with this gem - Tim
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Date: 10/6/2013 5:56:00 PM
Carrie CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting the ""LONGING poem"" contest <----- Awesome!! If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "FORBIDDEN". Enjoy my latest blog! "ALL SHE WROTE" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15995&PoetID=18720 -------take care & enjoy your coming week. Love*** Linda
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Date: 4/16/2012 9:46:00 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite Carrie and congratulations on your winning place xx
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:09:00 PM
great read on a well worded winner Carrie.."
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 9:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie!! Very touching...*tear* bigh hugs, love deb
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:47:00 PM
This entry was read aloud several times and each time it was read, my throat closed up more and more! Such a display of motherly emotion, Carrie. You did this free verse with awesome-ness! Congrats on this finely crafted emotional write. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 7/5/2011 1:00:00 AM
Lovely, Carrie. Sure to top the winners circle. Lainie
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:15:00 PM
I can relate to this...Sometimes children change so that the adult version doesn't seem like the same person..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Sara
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Date: 7/1/2011 12:05:00 PM
Excellent entry for the contest. Nice imagery and flow. Good luck :)
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Date: 7/1/2011 11:41:00 AM
a very beautiful and creative piece. thank you for commenting on A Yellow Rose. I made this up, i did lose a son, but he was 39, this one was for all the fathers who lost a son early in life.
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