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You Danced With Me Tonight

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You Danced With Me Tonight

You danced with me tonight underneath the starry sky, You held my hands tenderly and I felt I could fly. Suddenly I felt how it was like to be your girl, Never minding if the surroundings were in a swirl. But gravity pulled me down from the clouds very fast, And the fall shattered my heart into thousands like glass. So I held you tight, never desiring to let go, Let go of this moment that I have been waiting for. Knowing that the tune will stop and this dance will end soon, I wanted very much to wrap my arms around you And tell you I'm just here waiting to be loved by you. Love, even though I knew that I could never do so, It was greatly enough for me to just hold you tight. Let me hold you tight just for this dance, just for tonight.

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  1. Date: 7/17/2012 10:18:00 AM
    A deep poem with feeling. i enjoyed please keep writting so i can add you as a favorite =)

  1. Date: 5/12/2012 5:39:00 AM
    a brave lady. well written, with a beautiful presentation.

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 10:53:00 PM
    pretty this is great,i like the flavour,the flow,the feeling ..nice and grt work.

  1. Date: 5/1/2012 5:16:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Patricia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol