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You Could Watch Me

Could you watch Me watching paint Dry and know That everything In me, is thinking- Only you. Could you know That when my Back is turned, Even hell, in my Body burns- Only just for you. Can you comprehend That with you in my mind- All reason, trust And Knowledge; I transcend. More is something I must feel; when you are Not near- because It’s only after then, That I envision clear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2010 9:29:00 PM
oh I went all mushy. Makes me remember that first rose of love, before it bloomed and the petals fall off. I miss that first bud most of all.
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:12:00 PM
WoW! simple wow!
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Date: 8/5/2010 10:02:00 AM
Excellent poem, David. I especially liked the last verse. Our ability to see things clearly does seem to be enhanced when the one we love most is nearby. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:04:00 AM
I wish to watch that paint dry,I wonder if its something abstract that you paint,or if its the woman in your thought?Sweet pome Mr Byrne,I like :)Celene"
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:13:00 AM
Great write, David! Enjoyed the read this early afternoon and thank you for your comments!...Gert
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:03:00 AM
Wow Mr. Coffee shop!! lol Awesome, think I'm speechless... Wilma
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:19:00 PM
this is interesting. & making your readers want to read more towards the end.to envision more clear when that person is gone. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:47:00 PM
Awesome, David!
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:10:00 PM
Intense and masterfully skilled write David.. from deep down dealing with 'stuff'... have not been FBing very much.. no time at all..maybe early a.m. before my LUV gets here tomorrow.. will try.. my friend.. feel your intensity..I do..withl uv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:17:00 PM
strong feelings potrayed!!
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