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You Conrtol Me

You Control Me As I sank into my depression, I wondered How could I let it go this far Watching my existence pummel far from me My conscience left my soul Now you control me that’s what you were planning to do Killing me slowly My only reminder is a scab or two Controlled by my obsession Committing no wrong, now you just pull me along I need your comfort, I need your love, I need your help first and most of Break me to my knees and make me cry I forgot hat it felt like to feel And now I don’t care if I die Now you control me, look me in the eyes Leave me be, now, I aint ready to die I will overcome I cannot resume Living my life full of death I feel ill be dead soon So let me tell you baby when I look into your eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/17/2015 1:09:00 PM
Remarkable poem my friend, enjoyed reading it...hugs / / :D dalia
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Date: 11/22/2015 8:12:00 PM
This is the same poem?? Different title though.
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William Curlee
Date: 11/23/2015 6:46:00 PM
Thanks for the heads up. Somehow I mixed it,up. Go check out the real "An If and A Lie" and tell me what you think. DEUCES

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