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You Cheated Our Son

I didn’t mind when you left me. It was time to split; I agree. We had our life and it was done, But why’d you take away my son? He needed his father, can’t you see? You cheated him; you cheated me. I think of those days flyin' kites, Catchin’ fireflies summer nights, Jumpin’ into the swimmin’ hole. These treasured times meant more than gold. He needed his father, can’t you see? You cheated him; you cheated me. Those tears he cried, wavin' goodbye, I turned away, my tears to hide. You took him many miles away, But I still think of him each day. He needed his father, can’t you see? You cheated him; you cheated me. I call and you hang up the phone. Next time I see him, he’ll be grown. The bond we had was special to us, But it vanished with that Greyhound bus. He needed his father, can’t you see? You cheated him; you cheated me. *Entry for Paula’s “Play Me a Cheatin’ Song” contest

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Date: 5/27/2011 4:44:00 PM
very sad poem and very moving
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Date: 5/26/2011 2:08:00 PM
This is so very sad, Carolyn. Would make a great song to sing to, but still tears would be there. Nicely done...good luck with your entry!! Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:34:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem. The rhyming seems so perfect when I recite it. Nice read for me tonight. The cheating though is heartbreaking. Thank you for your warm thoughts about the golden fleece Im seeking. I will look forward reading your poem here in Poetry Soup. Dalila
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Date: 5/25/2011 11:18:00 PM
Great job!!
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Date: 5/25/2011 1:57:00 AM
Carolyn,Congrats on your big win with this amazing write!
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:44:00 AM
Whew Carolyn!!! The message and imagery in this write are amazing. So heart-wrenching, so much truth! Great luck in the contest! Lay
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:35:00 PM
I feel hurt in this one. Pain makes for the best reads as selfish as that sounds. But I do pay for this selfishness with my own traumas. EXCELLENT! I posted some new stuff. Please do read if you have a moment. ~JSLambert
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:35:00 PM
seven!!!!
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:06:00 PM
Carolyn, Now all ya need is a great melody for this cheatin song and u can sing it on your big fishin trip!! That will be a hoot! Congrats! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/23/2011 3:05:00 PM
congrats on your win. cory
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Date: 5/23/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of paula, Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:34:00 PM
I thought I'df ind this one up there. Congratulations Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:00:00 PM
Congrats, Carolyn. Outstanding piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:25:00 AM
Lovely write, my friend. Many congratulations on your win : ) I've never heard of Don Henley. I love listening to Callas, Pavarotti, Roberto Alagna and Angela Gheorghiu - my BP lowers just thinking about that music : ) Hope you're having a great day - I guess you're packing your suitcase?
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Date: 5/23/2011 10:13:00 AM
congrats on the glowing win, carols.. so well-scribed i felt the gripping reality of this one! :) huggs
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:02:00 PM
wow you nailed this one Carolyn.. So love this write of yours.. A definite favourite for me ;) love Wilma
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:09:00 PM
very touching and heart warming. thank you for commenting on Skies Cloudy.
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Date: 5/21/2011 10:05:00 PM
Wonderful take on the cheatin' contest. My son was cheated that way also. I thought you were off fishing. Thanks for reading and saying nice things about my entries.
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:18:00 AM
WOW, very strong words of choices not made the way you wanted... and now coping and living with it.... good deep write, my dear Carolyn.....ANd thanks for the sweet comments.....love Michael
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Date: 5/21/2011 6:25:00 AM
Yes, it must be a terrible thing. This happened to my mother's cousin and he lost his daughters completely. Very sad. Great write, my friend. Glad you got the Mayflower Steps pic - it took ages to send, so I wasn't sure if you'd get it.
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Date: 5/21/2011 2:07:00 AM
this one is very "song like" Carolyn. I can see it being on the radio! As for the american idol, I was disappointed. Haley , in my opinion, is the better one and I would rather have seen a non country against the country than two country singers against each other. There is no drama this time. Of course Scotty will win it!
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:50:00 AM
* “Very Heart Moving * Dear Talented & Beautiful Carolyn. * This Stirring Poem Which Pours From Your Loving & Beautiful Heart * A Regretful Moment Close to Home Yet * Countless Shards of Broken Mirrors Reflections * Plaguing Precious Hearts Far Too Often * Very Endearing & Very Beautiful * A Fave From A Beautiful Poetess. * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/21/2011 12:06:00 AM
Good piece here Carolyn this looks like a winning shot to me!
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Date: 5/20/2011 8:52:00 PM
Sound like a cheating song alright Carolyn, Cool job, Good luck in Oaula's contest. Agape, Moses
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/20/2011 10:56:00 PM
John, sadly I know of a few men who've lost contact with their children when their wives took them away. To me it seems very unfair to bothe the father and son.
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