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you can't see me eternaly suffer

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you can't see me eternaly suffer

Thou shall pay, for what
thou has said and done to me
for I suffer
what you can't see is hidden
but, soon you will realize and change.

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  1. Date: 11/21/2009 5:08:00 AM
    This drama is ineresting..I can't wait to read the next entry between you and Alec......poetry wars?

  1. Date: 11/19/2009 1:19:00 PM
    very good! thanks for your comments on my work. inspiring.

  1. Date: 11/19/2009 7:44:00 AM
    Nicely done Tanka. Keep the pen flowing. Sara