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You Can Prove Your Faith

L-ong night and chill are over, O-pen air shares the mirth; V-ile weather is already gone, E-arly morning March twelfth. L-onely evening has faded, as the shadows disappear; Y-our day of birth has caused so much joy and laughter. F-eel the gentle breeze, A-fter the rain stops falling; J-ust let the sun rise and shine, A-nother new day is dawning. R-ough sea cannot be avoided, D-arkest hour comes while you wait; O-nly when clime is inclement you can prove your faith.

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Date: 12/29/2016 12:11:00 AM
This poem seem very formulaic. I can't really sense emotion. A lot of the words have already been said before so it has generic quality. I do like these lines: R-ough sea cannot be avoided, D-arkest hour comes while you wait,;
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 12/29/2016 5:53:00 PM
Thanks, Lyon++++++++++++++ I appreciate your comment.... HAPPY NEW YEAR++++++++++++

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