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You Built This Wall

You built this wall, 
Between you and I. 
Constructed it all,
With every white lie. 

Reflections of guilt,
You seemed to care. 
My heart was then spilt,
Until it went bare. 

The holes in my mind,
Were dug with deception. 
You robbed my soul blind,
Im left no direction. 

Im hung out to dry,
Self-soaked in my tears. 
A fervorous try,
Was tainted by sneers. 

You stomped on my back,
And broke every bone. 
A full-on attack,
No mercy was shown. 

You built this wall,
Between you and I. 
So don't ever call,
I've said my goodbye. 

-Yours Truly

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  1. Date: 6/2/2013 2:28:00 PM
    I love this poem !kinda reminds me of a really good sad song

    Truly Avatar Yours Truly
    Date: 6/2/2013 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I actually do write music lol it may be a good one to make a song out of. I'm terrible with writing lyrics so I just write poems instead. Thanks again Jamie! :) keep on keepin on! -Yours truly
  1. Date: 5/17/2013 4:17:00 AM
    Good write, Yours Truly. I like your rhyming scheme. Well done. :-)

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 4:16:00 AM
    Wow..someone did you in bad! You describe great visuals. Broken heart is no fun. Hopefully there will be no more! Thanks for reading my stuff too ;) Cheers, Sharon

    Truly Avatar Yours Truly
    Date: 5/17/2013 4:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your too kind :) and I hope so too miss Sharon, broken hearts fuel creative juices which produce food for thought in a positive outlook. It means the world to me that you are diggin it ;) keep in touch! Much love -Yours Truly
    Morken Avatar Sharon Morken
    Date: 5/17/2013 4:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no more people breaking your heart is what i meant. I sure hope you keep writing cause I dig it!