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You Blew Your Cover

Ok you found the way To my bleeding heart Unlocked the door Maybe love can start Come inside Take a look around I will not hide From the pain you found The tears I cried When you went away I kept them inside For this special day So take a piece If you like Can’t cry no more I’m cold as ice Can you light the fire Once again Turn up the heat For an old friend Turn this spark Into a flame Until its roaring And burns the pain I said I loved you But that didn’t count You walked away Said you had some doubts But let’s be truthful You saw another It was in your eyes You blew your cover © Copyright KC.Leake 26th April 2015 All Rights Reserved Based On Fantasy

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/11/2015 8:30:00 AM

Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7

Kevin Leake
Date: 5/14/2015 12:21:00 PM

Thanks Funom, Appreciate your commets as always Best Wishes Kevin

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 5:20:00 PM

I like it when poems are based on fantasy. That way, I won't say something wrong, LIKE! It makes me sad, that this happen to you.... LOL, But I am not gonna say that. Instead, I'm gonna say.. Your poem rocks, and I am glad you are still around. I haven't seen you on my pages so i had no ideas. I found your poetic name on my favorite poet list. Kevin, I love the poem, painful to know this kind of doubts happens. I am like a ghost,, mysterious when it comes to love. But once love hits the fan. I walk away, not wanting to feel the pain. A frozen heart is better than one in pain. Love Linda

Kevin Leake
Date: 4/27/2015 12:49:00 PM

Hi Linda, I appreciate your uplifting comments Best Wishes Kevin

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2015 12:17:00 PM

Oh this feels so sad...Nothing hurt more than not saying the true reason of a goodbye..not even the goodbye itself.

Kevin Leake
Date: 4/27/2015 12:48:00 PM

Sorry didn't mean to write a sad one!! Thank you for the comments Charma Best Wishes Kevin

Tim Smith

Date: 4/26/2015 12:08:00 PM

Wonderful "fantasy" more nightmare...You can definitely tell through the eyes...nice one Tim

Kevin Leake
Date: 4/27/2015 12:46:00 PM

Hey Tim, Thanks for popping by and for the comments Best Wishes Kevin