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You Bamboozle Me

I am an abomination Worthy of your scorn There can be no affection for one such as I I will never know your passion I am left yearning I struggle to hold onto the possibility of us My attempt is but a foolish dream Still I cherish the sound of your voice I value this bambooziling relationship The flame of you is engraved on my heart I taste your scent on my lips I long for your tender touch My inner soul crys out If I receive but one kiss, my heart will fully bloom Dictionary fun...#1... Dililah's Words Poetry contest

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Date: 6/18/2013 2:39:00 PM
What an ending line....my mama used the word bamboozle all the time....ah...memories. Reading u before I drift off....good night from this part of the world....
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations Richard ...Seren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2012 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Seren.
Date: 12/10/2012 9:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win Richard :D
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2012 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Yanny.
Date: 12/10/2012 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Richard xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2012 5:19:00 AM
Thanks Mandy
Date: 12/10/2012 12:11:00 AM
I love how you delved into heartache Richard - very nice. Well done!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2012 5:18:00 AM
Thanks Yvette
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2012 5:17:00 AM
Thanks Vicky
Date: 12/9/2012 11:59:00 PM
"my heart will fully bloom," touching words. Congrats!
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Date: 12/9/2012 1:39:00 PM
Hello Richard... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/9/2012 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 12/4/2012 2:11:00 PM
Wow!! I enjoyed reading this so much. When I got to the end and realized your word choice was confined I was that much more impressed. Well done
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/4/2012 2:14:00 PM
Thanks Joe Appreciate your kind words and you spending time looking through some of my poems.
Date: 11/25/2012 1:50:00 PM
I love the title of your poem. This poem of a troubled soul seeking the redemptive kiss from his one true love. Excellent write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:30:00 PM
I had to use all the words for the dictionary contest. Glad you liked it. Bamboozle was a tough one to use in a sentence.
Date: 11/25/2012 1:01:00 PM
Richard I like this romantic verse..David
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:33:00 PM
Thanks David, it was a fun one to write.
Date: 11/25/2012 11:41:00 AM
Well done Richard! Filled with emotion and passion! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Cecillia
Date: 11/25/2012 9:52:00 AM
Wow, this is bold and passionate, another masterpiece of different pattern poetry, tremendous Richard, good luck for your contest :D- Hug, Yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:31:00 PM
Thanks Yanny, you are so kind.
Date: 11/25/2012 7:27:00 AM
Touching write my friend... you write with much passion... enjoyed.... Michael
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:32:00 PM
Thanks Michael, I will drop by and read some of yours.
Date: 11/25/2012 5:55:00 AM
This brings back sweet memories of my first love many many years ago! But Cathie has made me realize, all my life I was just waiting for us to happen. Have a great day, my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:34:00 PM
Jack as always, good to hear from you. I will make my way over to see what you are up to.
Date: 11/24/2012 7:25:00 PM
A kiss for you Richard, very touching write my best wishes in contest xoxox Carma
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:35:00 PM
Thanks, always nice to get a kiss.
Date: 11/24/2012 5:12:00 PM
beautiful poem my friend...good luck in the contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2012 5:38:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I am always happy to acquire some luck. Hope you are having a great weekend.
Date: 11/24/2012 4:00:00 PM
You write with your heart, Richard, well done. - Luck in contest. - Have a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2012 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Anne. Unfortunately no long weekend for us Canadians, mybe I can become an honorary American for the weekend.
Date: 11/24/2012 3:36:00 PM
Richard, such passion in your write, oh yes, I have felt the yearning of lost love also, had it engraved on my heart, well done. Constance
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2012 3:43:00 PM
My heart ache was from a long time ago but if I allow myself to think about those emotions can fllod back.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2012 3:40:00 PM
Thanks Constance, appreciate you stopping by to visit.

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