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You Are the Cedar of Lebanon

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This is the third in the series of poems blessing my child. Hope you enjoy it!

How else can a mortal envisage your greatness if not through the envy of the majestic existence of the cedar of Lebanon? Your lofty height is damped in shady foliage And beautiful branches multiplying with long boughs Underground springs direct their rivers all around the place where you’re planted making you greater than all the trees in the field. Thick and solid, wider and commanding, strong and bold, gigantic and forever young even the general shermann giant sequoia bows to your simple intimidation All the birds of the sky will nest in your branches all the animals of the field will give birth beneath your boughs and your shade will create a means of livelihood to great nations The beauty of your greatness extends to the height of your limbs and your roots extending to abundant waters. Behold! Not even the cedars in God’s garden rival you nor the pine Trees compare to your branches. Also the plane ones, matching your trunk b'cos out of you, the coals of life would be burned And a better existence accurately circumcised.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/29/2021 10:12:00 PM
Back to read your poem again,
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Date: 5/6/2015 3:59:00 AM
Very endearing! I loved it
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/8/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Lei Strauss
Date: 5/4/2015 3:27:00 PM
A creative and descriptive poem, Funom. The cedar is the symbol of the Lebanese people. If not mistaken, Phoenician vessels were made from cedar wood; many of them sailed to Malta, where I live, nearly 2000 years ago. Top marks for your poem! // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/8/2015 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for your insightful, encouraging and revealing comment
Date: 5/2/2015 12:46:00 AM
What a splendid write my friend, I enjoyed this as I have just recently been among the cedars of Lebanon! Also very close to another great famous poet Kahlil Gibran
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:18:00 AM
Wow! Interesting, lovely and good to know. I hope I will be up there with great poets too some day.
Date: 4/30/2015 2:49:00 PM
Quite beautiful...deserves a "7".
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:16:00 AM
wow! Thank you for your kind rating
Date: 4/29/2015 8:36:00 AM
This sounds to be a magnificent tree.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:15:00 AM
Yes it is scott... Thank you so much
Date: 4/29/2015 8:05:00 AM
Exceptional piece!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard
Date: 4/28/2015 9:25:00 PM
Great write Funom, your love for this tree surely shows.....Seren
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:13:00 AM
yes seren... Thank you so much for your encouragement
Date: 4/28/2015 3:37:00 PM
I like the creativeness of this one.. The comparison of one that you love to tne cedars of Lebanon is unusual and probably only a person who is familiar with the tree personally or the term from the Bible would be able to write as such.. I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/4/2015 10:19:00 AM
Good to know that you know the Good Book..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:12:00 AM
Thank you a million Sara.... The inspiration is straight from the Bible
Date: 4/28/2015 2:35:00 PM
a tree nothing like it put on your flag you should be proud
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Catherine
Date: 4/28/2015 10:44:00 AM
My goodness you are teaching me so much, I'm going now to look up this majestic tree! Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/28/2015 10:46:00 AM
Oh yes now I long to see one for real sit beneath it lean against it!
Date: 4/28/2015 9:51:00 AM
Is this a personification of the tree? I like to tink about it as a tree and thats how it is excellent! Creative and swell indeed. Thumbs up.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Kamoonpuri
Date: 4/28/2015 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful piece!!! Funom .... Hope your child grows to exceed these heights.... thanks for the visit
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:09:00 AM
AMEN Wilfred.. Thank you so much friend
Date: 4/28/2015 9:18:00 AM
Very beautiful poem as always Funom , your descriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Blessings dear friend Eve
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/4/2015 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2015 9:19:00 AM
Fav. :~)

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