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You Are Not Here

YOU ARE NOT HERE and i am left crying but you cannot hear or see me so i cry more until.. there's... nothing... left but hurt,fear,sadness and depression and streaks of blackness running down my face i think why me? why now? why here? i look around and all i see is darkness no light no comforting warmth just coldness i am alone i say to myself YOU ARE NOT HERE YOU ARE NOT HERE YOU ARE NOT HERE!! i miss everything about you but why? you hurt me you used me yet i was so loyal to you i looked up to you while you looked down on me i used to cry over you leaving but now i happily scream YOU ARE NOT HERE NOR WILL YOU EVER BE

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2016 2:41:00 PM

Miquela, , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/24/2016 2:16:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/23/2016 5:31:00 PM

Wow . Full of feelings and what a turn about at the end. Good job on that. !