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You Are My Umbrella

You are my umbrella, In sun and in rain, In you I will dwell, my trust; Like a snail in its shell. When the siege comes, And the trouble water pours; Or the fire becomes wild, I shall snore and not be afraid. In my trust I will seek refuge, Under you I will seek my comfort; Abide in your faithul promise To the vanity of my predators. If I doubt you my confidence Let me become impotent prey In the side pouch of my hunters You are my trust, you are my bet. I will dare rain, I will dare sun, My umbrella has no hole. User’s name : Kayod5. Contest : Symbolism,a.k.a Umbrella. Visual 1 Sponsor : Nette. Date : 23/2/2014 .

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Date: 3/9/2014 9:04:00 AM
This is very nice congrats on the win.....Tim
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:17:00 PM
:) SWEETLY AND BEAUTIFULLY PEN. :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:36:00 AM
hey, I was right . the first time I saw this I guessed visual one and now I see you have won a placement in the contest with this sweet poem. Congratulations
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:52:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win,
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Date: 3/7/2014 3:02:00 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, Kayod5 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2014 1:00:00 PM
Nice imagery, Well done. Best wishes Linda x
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Date: 2/25/2014 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Linda,your comment is delightful.
Date: 2/25/2014 12:15:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..I haven't checked out the contest so I am not sure what it is about..I have seen several entries though..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
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Date: 2/25/2014 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Sara,your comment delights me.
Date: 2/25/2014 11:47:00 AM
- Uniquely for the contest, Kayod5 !!! - Good luck, hope it will be high up on the winning list. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/25/2014 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Anne,your comment delights me.
Date: 2/23/2014 10:04:00 PM
This is fantastic my friend, You have written an amazing poem here Kayod5! I surely loved reading this lovely poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/23/2014 11:25:00 PM
Immense thanks Russell for being my Umbrella.Have a great day.
Date: 2/23/2014 6:30:00 PM
Nice one, my friend. Which picture did you use for your inspiration? The first one? You have to put the number of the picture to qualify! I chose the fourth one! I really love the last line of this one. Too many guys have holes in their umbrellas. Women are looking for the guys with good umbrellas!!!
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Date: 2/23/2014 11:28:00 PM
Immense thanks Andrea for being my Umbrella.Have a great day.

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