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You are the half that makes me whole you are the beat in which keps my heart going You are the finish to a long race You are the music that fills my soul You are the dreamer in my dream youre my all in all I love you so much

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Date: 3/5/2010 3:33:00 PM
this is a good poem...keep going, hope you keep writing poetry
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Date: 3/4/2010 2:41:00 PM
wow i love this poem it is so sweet and very original, i love the line you are my all in all, very clever! whoever this is is lucky to ahve you writing about them, this is really heartfelt and beautiful.Jo
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:41:00 AM
So romantic, I enjoyed that.
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Date: 3/2/2010 5:44:00 PM
Wonderfully described poem
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