You and Me Love

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Dawning light of a new day and as the sun begins rising inside kindness awakens magic rays standing shedding skin naked truth Warmly holding the breath breathless when I saw you my Queen on wings echoes whispered crowned today within a silver dewdrop halo sparkles unique Stepping stones diamond glistening rainbows one of a kind Songbirds chirping in a heavenly choir rejoicing magic leading the soul to happiness bringing joy your gift In your distant night the right direction shines as part of you dwells in the heart each new moon howls opening up each time caring deeply I aim to please As now walking hand in hand seems real marvel with you finding a pathway in the right direction sweetly floating with butterflies dancing on your breath supreme An honour would be to dance with happy ever cherishing after all one smile from you lights a ballroom of dreams lips of crimson tides only destiny holds the keys where always was forever

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/6/2016 7:42:00 AM

Ahhh, "where always was forever"...very nice way to end this piece. Very nice! I'm not very familiar with the Terza Rima style of poetry. Thanks for exposing me my friend. MC

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2016 5:24:00 AM

such an endearing work, liam... i like this!..huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/26/2016 9:00:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^