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You and I

My feet dance across the universe My arms open wide, I spin within Love has caught me Wrapped up in your smile, deep inside I climb Under your skin I breathe you inn Hopelessly falling Your perfect crazy heart is mine As I dream I hold you tight Beneath this love our cleansing sins, melts into a stolen kiss Together let's make forever a long slow ride Together & eternity you & I..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/10/2013 7:10:00 PM
Forgot to rate it 7 <3
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:09:00 PM
Yayyyyy....clap clap clap!!!! I LOVE this!! Totally awesome write! Just crazy beautiful...wow :-D Can't wait to read more....love Ruby xxx
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Date: 2/12/2013 12:42:00 PM
NICEWRITE AGIN LOTS OF EMOTION HEART XX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 2/6/2013 1:41:00 AM
Very nice! I can really feel the love in this fantastic write.Keep them comming! :o)
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Date: 1/30/2013 7:04:00 AM
This is a lovely poem Kerry. Very romantic and passionate. I thinkI like poems like this the best. Easy to relate to and well written. Love Pam.
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Date: 1/28/2013 6:49:00 AM
Your passion semms to be culminating to the brink. I truly like the poem. I usually am more into dark vivid imagery, but poems of passion are deep too. Nice poem.
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Date: 1/28/2013 4:07:00 AM
Love in the air, Kerry - Wonderful written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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