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'you and I'

If this was a perfect world you would be mine our journey started years ago by chance not even planning for it to still mean something after all this time... In the midst of your confusion the little bit that made sense led you back to me not planned, not predestined just time in a nutshell We get to do more now than we ever did before share more, even the dark side of worry seem to slip away through the cracks filling the not knowing to what might be no future mapped out, only today and all its treasures, I know the Master said don’t worry about tomorrow or your past focus on the now treasure what you have today I’ve learned that what we fear might not come through It’s part of living, wish I knew that the other day
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/26/2012 1:09:00 PM
I really like the way you closed this poem. With wisdom.. :o)
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Date: 11/16/2012 2:01:00 AM
so expressive to feel every vibration of this magnificent write Wilma dear friend ..words touch deeply into the heart of emotion luv .. always a pleasure to read your thoughts luv .. we r all safe from hurricane with minimal damage here and there .. now just plain cold ..shiver temps in 30's .. oh
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:24:00 PM
love this thoughtful write, my friend. Thanks so much for your kind words lfde
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Date: 11/9/2012 4:05:00 PM
Well hello my lady across the sea.. How is my CTH doing?? Yes we survived Sandy and the snow storm that followed but we are all cool and moving on with the cleanup.. much love your way as always... amazing piece that has deep meanings throughout.. I love it and u too but you know that... oxox Michael
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Date: 11/9/2012 10:44:00 AM
This is so inspiring, Wilma...we do need to enjoy the treasures of each day in our lives.. Profound and well written verse. Much love, Annalise
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Date: 11/8/2012 9:05:00 PM
Thanks for this! it's so touching and beautiful. I agree with Elizabeth. It is a great reminder of the world. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/8/2012 7:03:00 PM
I could copy this and put it in my pocket to remind me this isn't a perfect world and I'm probably part of the problem. Had a bad day so I need to focus that tomorrow will be better. This gives me hope it might be. Loved it Wilms! :)
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Date: 11/8/2012 2:48:00 PM
Oh Wilma, this is a wonderful heartfelt poem, and the message, just awesome.....
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Date: 11/8/2012 12:38:00 PM
reflective thoughts that fill this page with languid imagery, wilms... so well done; i like!.:) huggs!
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Date: 11/8/2012 10:01:00 AM
Beautiful words! I myself need to learn to focus more on the now. Fantastic poem Wilma. Hope everything is going well with you and your life! Take care.... Chris
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Date: 11/7/2012 3:54:00 PM
It's so good to see y ou back here after your short time away and to see you posting more incredible poetry such as this. A very enjoyable piece.
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Date: 11/5/2012 10:41:00 AM
This is a very sentimental write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and harmonious poem this afternoon! What a powerful and enlightening piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:05:00 AM
Make that pink rose your avatar!
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Date: 11/5/2012 8:04:00 AM
Thoughtful words and a deep poem here Wilma.Lovely read.
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Date: 11/5/2012 6:46:00 AM
Very sweet poem Wilma - unfortunately is not our world so perfect - wish it was "little more" as you type. Wish you a good day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2012 6:11:00 AM
nicely written Wilma....makes you wonder if it's all preordained....love
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