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You and Eye

It can't be real, did I just see That cute young girl just wink at me I'm sure I must have seen it wrong But just in case, I'll play along I steal another furtive glance Again I catch her eye by chance She looked straight at me and that's when I saw her wink at me again With lush red lips and hair so blonde I know somehow I must respond Should I just return her wink My hearts on fire, I've got to think I look again and she's still there Running her fingers through her hair I'd love to know what she is thinking All I know is she's still winking I get up and walk toward her The space between us just a blur I greet her with “how do you do”? She looks and says “do I know you”? “We've never met I do not think” I'm here because I saw you wink I must admit to my surprise I'll bet you have your pick of guys She said “I think you misconstrued” I wasn't winking at you dude That isn't what this is about You see, my contact lens fell out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/26/2012 4:50:00 PM
Oh, you really had me going with this tale of new love, Bob. Then the punch line at the end had me laughing out loud. Hey, I'm blonde and if you look my way, I'll wink at you! Very nice work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/26/2012 9:34:00 PM
I wish you would. I'd be flattered.
Date: 1/25/2012 2:47:00 PM
adorable! i had a feeling it was heading in that direction, but the rhyme and the flow just carried me along very pleasantly. thanks for a great read!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/25/2012 5:10:00 PM
And thanks for your comments
Date: 1/25/2012 2:35:00 PM
Lol, really enjoyed this one Bob, made me laugh big time. Elizabeth
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/25/2012 5:11:00 PM
I'm glad I made you laugh. Something we should all do more of. Thank you Elizabeth
Date: 1/25/2012 1:43:00 PM
Cute one with a surprise ending..Enjoyed reading your story in poetic form..If for a contest, should be in winner's circle..Thanks for stopping by, and letting me know that I place in a contest..Sara
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/25/2012 2:06:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Sara
Date: 1/25/2012 11:17:00 AM
lol ( :=) long nose) - funny poem Bob.She was to young ...... oxox love Anne-Lise
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/25/2012 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 1/25/2012 11:02:00 AM
awwww so funny Bob. but it sure wouldn't be if it was happening to a person. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/25/2012 2:06:00 PM
So right. Thanks Carol

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