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Who rocks Who swings Who knocks me off my feet Who laughs Who gleams Who makes my heart do strange things Who gazes Who dreams Who can do incredible things Who beams Who glows Who I hope feels for me too Is non-other than you

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Date: 11/30/2016 10:17:00 AM
I love how simplistic this is, yet it manages to have a strong meaning. I love it!
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Noah Cronnelly
Date: 12/1/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/28/2016 7:51:00 PM
Noah,this is acute love poem.
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Noah Cronnelly
Date: 11/28/2016 7:52:00 PM
Eeeeyyyyyy!!!!! Also if acute is the poem type, I'll change it to that
Date: 11/28/2016 7:06:00 PM
I added in the fourth stanza (correct me if I'm wrong) to help the poem flow better.
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