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I looked for you but all my life your kind I never found the one who'd whisper in my ear then take to lay me down who harbors me when things go wrong and smiles to say "I know I love you more tonight than any other day " Somehow I feel these feelings I've never felt before Your fiery breathe upon my neck wet lips I adore The tenderness you bring from a giant of a man Though powerless beside you let me love you all I can

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Date: 6/6/2015 9:38:00 PM
Judy, beautifully penned, a lovely 7, some of the comments are so funny, those guys are not very romantic, lol and thanks for visiting my poem, for rent
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 9:42:00 PM
Girl...get with the program ...No guy is romantic....LOL
Date: 6/4/2015 9:27:00 AM
Lyric Man thought it was him but I know it was really about me!!! "Fiery breath"... yup, definitely me! LOL Love you dear Judy! xxxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/4/2015 9:53:00 AM
LOL!!!!
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Judy Konos
Date: 6/4/2015 9:50:00 AM
You're NOT suppose to tell them! TRY TO REMEMBER: Never let anyone know where you park your goat!
Date: 6/1/2015 3:00:00 AM
beautiful and full of passion, enjoyed your write ~Luv S.K.A.T.
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Date: 6/1/2015 1:28:00 AM
one word - WOW! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/1/2015 12:30:00 AM
Hi Judy what a lovely romantic poem you have written here, I hope you found him LoL. take care.........Vera..........
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