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You yes you , you drive me crazy you make me have hope one day it will be just me and you. You know me better than I know myself sometimes, why can I just have you all to myself just one day that is all I ask for I smile just being around you , I just want wrap myself in your warm embrace forget all of my problems. You! yes you, you drive me crazy you make me have hope one day it will be just me and you. I do not know why I can not forget all the consequences and just be with you You care for me even when I am in the wrong and forgive me You tell me I am pretty when I just woke up but that is my favorite lie. You yes you, you drive me crazy you make me have hope one day it will be just me and you. I just want to lay in bed all day and do nothing but watch t.v. with you I do not care what we do as long as I am with you somedays all I want is you. You yes you , you drive me crazy you make me have hope one day it will be just me and you.

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Date: 9/5/2014 4:45:00 AM
An irony emerges from your stanzas; our imperfect world versus our ideals for relationships. An interesting write, concerning couples' longings for their wishes, perhaps illusions and the compromises we make. Uniquely formatted, very well voiced, Kara...YourPSfriend...Gene
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Kara Fraine
Date: 9/5/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thank you I feel as if concerning wishes we must face the reality of our situation
Date: 9/5/2014 4:31:00 AM
I hope your dreams come true this is a tbeautiful write:-) hugs jan xx
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Kara Fraine
Date: 9/5/2014 1:03:00 PM
Thank you jam :)
Date: 9/5/2014 3:39:00 AM
Kara, this is a beautiful poem. Verlena
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Kara Fraine
Date: 9/5/2014 1:03:00 PM
I am glad you enjoyed it :)

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