You

I'm fading into oblivion; I am slowly disappearing under the shadow of who has no comparison. I am but a speck in the grandness before me. My love; you.

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Tim Smith

Date: 5/30/2014 6:44:00 PM

Very well crafted..good luck in the contest..Tim

L.James Tanner
Date: 6/1/2014 9:40:00 AM

Thank you very much Tim, I appreciate the read and comment.

Arlene Smith

Date: 5/30/2014 2:34:00 PM

So beautiful!!... So much conveyed in so few words... A fan... Arlene...KHYU

L.James Tanner
Date: 5/30/2014 4:38:00 PM

Thank you very much Arlene, I appreciate it. :)

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 5/30/2014 1:56:00 PM

Nice sentimental Nonet. Well done. Thanks for commenting on mine.

L.James Tanner
Date: 5/30/2014 2:00:00 PM

Thanks Mark. This is the first time I have ever tried one of these type of poems. And I see many other types here I haven't tried or been aware of...Great site.