You

You There is a part of me that is simply happy that you exist, that I met you and you aren’t the only one of your kind. I think of you and at times, this seems to be enough. But there are other times, and now more frequently, that this turns into a greedy, grasping desire. I think I could want you for myself.

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Skat A

Date: 1/28/2016 11:22:00 AM

READING THIS A SECOND TIME...SKAT

Skat A

Date: 5/30/2014 11:25:00 PM

Hi Audrey,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2014 7:47:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Audrey :) - I choose your first written poem "You" - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 4:35:00 PM

Audrey, this is a good poem, feeling greedy over someone, is a part of life, I would say. I like this poem,, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/29/2014 4:03:00 PM

Great write - love it!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/29/2014 3:46:00 PM

I can really relate to this write.I hope it turns out for you Hugs Jan