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You

You just I met and gazed into Your exquisite eyes shining as brilliantly as the moonlight casting its delicate reflection across the steel gray waters of the deepest sea and of the darkest night. You I saw standing there waiting patiently for me Your smile is the source of my contentment as radiant as the glowing stars in a cloudless night reaching out to caress my face so sweetly sultry enough to dissipate my every objection and rejection of You being carelessly near to me plummeting so deep into some thing that may be beyond what love is or can ever be could I bear to let go of my rationality to embark into this vast passion beside You that superficially consumes entirely and spews out remnants of me?

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Date: 9/18/2013 12:05:00 PM
Oh, what a passionate love poem! I wrote a poem called "You" as well, but that was a long time ago and wasn't as complex, it was very simple -this is good work Christina! MC
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Christina Holmes
Date: 9/23/2013 12:01:00 AM
Thank you Marquis. This is one of my first "Lovey-Dovey" poems.

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