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I caress you in my arms and your beauty alarms me... your soft skin disarms me and your musical voice charms me... I lose myself within you everytime our lovemaking begins a new... And I knew in that moment that I had to vent my sentiments I love you and my essence would plead too that I drink you, I eat you, and I breath you ...I need you!... By Soul's Floetry

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/30/2013 7:11:00 AM

After reading your response to the other comments down below, its a confirmation that you are a performer. ...I would love to do spoken word one day. I came up with Carry my INK Father. ...its kinda hard to tell where you breathe and pause in the structure that its in. Good luck with your work. I don't have Facebook bc of my occupation. But I'll try and see what I can create. Love your work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2013 10:23:00 PM

A wonderful featured poem of the week ;-) PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/4/2013 10:22:00 PM

Dear Souls, thank you for the beautiful feeling while reading your poem. wow...to the lovely healthy image that keeps you going as we speak... water food and air.. always~ LINDA

Debra Falgout

Date: 2/4/2013 7:00:00 PM

Beautiful poetry writter, so much deepness in your writing, peace debra

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/5/2013 3:57:00 PM

Welcome to poetry Soup, an interesting write. Light & Love

Souls Floetry
Date: 2/1/2013 9:46:00 PM

Your style is different from mine and you would know more about the writing style that I'm learning. So if possible, I'd like to write you back and forth and get some pointers from you. As I said I'm trying to become a better poet.. and I'm surre communicating with you will expand my creativity. If you decide not to write I simply want to say thank you for welcoming me to poetry soup.Xavier Hardin #316900 Stanley Correctional Institution 100 Corrections Drive Stanley, WI 54768 Floetry

Souls Floetry
Date: 2/1/2013 9:41:00 PM

In the meantime I'm trying to become a better poet. I'm currently taking a "creative writing course". We just got into poetry using "Assonance" and "Alliteration". That was easy. This last class the assignment was to write a separate poem for metaphor,simile,personification,oxymoron,synecdocde,meton-ymy, etc. So I have to write a poem as an example of each specific category. I had your poem, "Shield Mate" mailed to me. It's an amazing poem!

Souls Floetry
Date: 2/1/2013 9:35:00 PM

Wa 'alaikum. First of all I want to thank you for welcoming me to poetry soup, I appreciate it. I apologize for taking so long to message you. But not only do I not have a direct connection to my poetry soup page, but I also have a "Soul's Floetry" page on facebook. I spend most of my time running that page. I check that page daily over the phone and am constantly doing things with the site. Those poems are more contriversal so none of them will likely be on this site. The poetry I do is called "spoken Word". It's meant to be "heard" not read. So right now I'm working on recording myself and putting the poems from my facebook site on "Youtube".

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/28/2012 1:36:00 AM

Beautiful write Floetry!!! The inevitability of falling when it comes to love has been described very well - the need always pulls you in and captures your heart. Well penned!

Souls Floetry
Date: 2/1/2013 9:25:00 PM

What you described was beyond a soulmate and the "true" attributes and signs of someone being "in" love. What I read was a mixture of a legend, myth, and the unattainable desire that gives a person enough hope to go on the next day. I can't comprehend the content of such a mind/soul that can create this. I envy your workmanship. You're an unequalled poetess. That brings me to this... I'm trying to become a better poet and you have a different style and insight. I'd like to correspond with you directly. Xavier Hardin#316900 Stanley Correctional Institution 100 Corrections Drive Stanley, WI.54768... If you decide not to write me thank you for simply taking an interest in that specific poem as it is. I hope to hear from you soon. Wa 'alaikum --------Floetry-

Souls Floetry
Date: 2/1/2013 9:16:00 PM

I apologize for taking so long to respond, please forgive me. First, I spend all of my time writing poems and putting them on my facebook page"Soul's Floetry". I'm taking a "creative writing course" to help write poetry better. I work with my facebook page "daily" over the phone but not my poetry soup page. Your poem was a shock to my system!

Souls Floetry
Date: 12/28/2012 5:05:00 PM

Thank you.