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Saw you and knew you We didnt even need to speak Saw you and wanted you in my life just the thought of you makes me sick So love sick my heart hurts So love sick my stomach hurts hunger no food can fill I need a bowlful of U Dosent make any sense I dont know you yet being without you Dosent make any sense I dont know you yet knowing you has changed me what a mind @$#%$ This needs to stop Stop invading my thoughts...I hate that I hate that you are so delicious ...ok I need to stop You have me and you have no idea Got to shake this..but I cant It's like I'm wearing the Queens crown so heavy and beautiful and YOU are the King But the kingdom dosent exist outside my mind YOU

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/12/2016 12:37:00 PM
Yoliswa c, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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Date: 8/30/2015 2:59:00 PM
YOLISWA, Great piece to read today, Well done ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/1/2011 12:39:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Yoliswa. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 8:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv..
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:54:00 PM
very well writ. :) excellent form and realistic theme. we all have fantasies. ------Ell
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