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you tore me to shreds with idiot lies and rumours try me again one word is enough i won't wait around you'll see bad decision one more time i'm done for but do you think you do me favours? do you think you mend me? consider me before you tear me r.thomas '10

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2010 8:00:00 PM

strong words and very brave,, it's good when one realizes they won't eat more than they should,, awesome write..P.D.

Ryan Thomas

Date: 7/6/2010 1:06:00 PM

thank you very much! i really appreciate it! i'm only 16, but i've been trying to get some poems 'out there' for quite a while now, and this seems like a really good place to do so.

Laura Malmstrom

Date: 7/6/2010 12:58:00 PM

This is so strong, and yet reeks with an undercurrent of the vulnerability you possess. Well written! -Laura