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you, you hurt me you devise me you make me cry you made me say goodbye now that you are gone... i can now say "so long"

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Date: 11/26/2009 7:12:00 PM
Great poem Debbie! Welcome to the soup!! I look forward to reading more of your poetry, and thanks for the comments on my poem! ~Jen~
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Date: 11/25/2009 5:31:00 PM
thanx for sharing.got a giggle out of that one.
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Date: 11/25/2009 4:25:00 AM
Such fasinating writing I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and heart with us today Debbie. I wish you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. May your writings inspire others to write from their hearts as well. Love, Carol
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