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She soo pretty, i think that im impressed. or mayb jus obessesed. with a women who really loves to see that S upon my chest. its birds singing or my alarm ringing cause every moment i can't stop myself from thinking. about you, i mean now its goin to take time for me to call u my boo. but its a struggle that everyday, im constantly trying to pursuit. the feeling of actually capturing, something thats brand new. she pretty and so true, man wat i just do. keeping u in my heart, imprinted jus like its a tattoo. because ur the most i ever wanted, and the ghost up up in mind that is constantly trying to haunt. but see i know so much, but this sort of like a rush. because everything happened so fast, and it was really jus like a blast. so sudden and unpredictable, but something i want to get to no. my vision is so blurred, but my mind is so clear. that ur walking out of the door, but i want to come near. to feel love that is so real, so that u can't quit hiding under your fear. jus gimme one shot, i promise i won't break your heart. you wanted that type, from all the others is apart. in other words not the same, with sucha a beautiful name. so elegant, and so new, like a model rising to fame. so i'll give u my number, or i'll see you up in the hall. outshinen all the girls, like she was a crystal ball. hopefully one day, i hoping that she will call. and gimme that answer, that will make me wanna fall. In happiness and rejoice, jus hearing her beautiful voice. so i'll be waiting here baby, until you make your choice.

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Date: 10/27/2009 9:56:00 AM
Very passionate love write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Eric. I look forward to reading more of it. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love Carol
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