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I want to feel inspired, To write a poem I try. Yet tonight I feel so tired Almost about to cry. I am trying hard to think, Of what I have to say. My thoughts are at the brink. Isn’t there any way?! To write what I feel ‘Bout this boy who is anew. This feeling, so surreal But for once I am true. I float on a cloud And no longer am I blue. For I finally found My poem in you.

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Date: 4/3/2009 8:49:00 PM
nice poem................................................its just the representation of ur feeling.
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Date: 10/12/2008 8:50:00 AM
What a perfect way to express your feelings, and yes...we all stumble at times to get the words out. You said it beautifully! Keep writing...you have so much heart! ~ :) Carrie
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Date: 10/11/2008 5:48:00 PM
hi I like this write, you might enjoy my write, writer's block, I like the flow of this, thanks for your comment, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/10/2008 12:41:00 PM
Lucky person! Cute love poem. God Bless. Vince
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