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Yet Another Mortal To Be

This frustration strikes me each day My efforts seem obsolete. With every passing second i think, if there's bliss i should ever meet? Life has got stagnant. Even the air seems immobile. I search for refuge, a friend of need, may be, for a while. I search for refuge, in poems of all might. The darkest of them all to me, seem just right. I crawl helplessly Battling the heart and mind. But the world is busy it seems To give a thought of such kind. Freedom is all that i need now I'm sighting an end thats truly mine. And so there would be less to lose And quit life, something i could never define!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2016 10:46:00 AM
swagat, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2015 2:49:00 PM
SWAG, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:36:00 PM
Creative and interesting expressions and a nice attempt to write quatrain
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:31:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Swagat. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:00:00 AM
The sadness of the poet comes through this, I hope this is just a poem and not your situation, it's good to let it out.
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