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Yesterday's Shade

Senior rage, spreads out Frustration, futility's hold.. World turn sun burning.'

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Jenni Kalicharan

Date: 9/11/2016 5:04:00 PM

I have to admit, I didn't quite grasp it until I read some of the comments but I won't beat myself up. I'm still learning. I'll be sure to check out more of your work here...

Becca Teagan

Date: 6/2/2016 1:18:00 AM

hmmm..... intriguing write, Joe.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2016 1:14:00 PM

There is a lot of frustration in life..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/4/2016 7:11:00 AM

Such a strong image you create in your senryu Joe :) Hope you are doing well

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/29/2016 6:58:00 AM

Man this is a little dark. Deep, yes. But I'll try something else, whatcha got?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2016 7:13:00 PM

Hi, Joe, thanks for reading a bit of my stuff today. I had to think up something about my name for that contest of PD's but truly I have had a few sleepless nights from Soup drama!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/24/2016 4:10:00 PM

Oh many things come to light here Joe,,I'll go with nature?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2016 5:50:00 PM

The burning image fits with senior rage. We'll all be seething in a few more years for SURE. It was good to see a new poem up.

Joe Xxxx

Date: 2/18/2016 11:41:00 PM

thank you

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/19/2016 3:05:00 PM

Good of you to visit Joe..'

Nathan D.

Date: 2/18/2016 9:17:00 PM

Fascinating write Joe. Read it several times and the possible meanings still coming. I'm going with optimism and thinking yesterday's shade comes from the same thing as today's sunlight or vice versa

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/19/2016 3:07:00 PM

Very good of you to look me up Nathan thanks also for the compliment..'