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Yesterday's Music

Yesterday’s Music The music of a burbling rill Close by a dry stone wall, And on the air, so calm and still A blackbird's fluting call Green finches in the rowan tree Join in the meadow’s song, And big fat yellow bumble bees Hum merrily along The flutter of a butterfly The flip of trout at play The rustle of a mouse nearby The sounds of yesterday... Janette's sounds contest--18th April

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Date: 5/14/2010 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in the contest with this beaut., Maggie! Enjoyed reading it, today...somehow, I missed it before...Audrey
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Date: 5/9/2010 9:03:00 AM
Congrats Margaret on your HM in the Sounds Familiar contest ... with this beautiful expressive poem..enjoy your win and Happy Mother's Day...luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 5/9/2010 8:31:00 AM
Nice use of sounds imagery and rhyme to convey your thoughts. I like the lighthearted feel. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Janette's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:39:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry Margaret. I hope it does well in the contest. I am putting this into my fav's. Love, Connie
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Date: 4/18/2010 2:50:00 AM
Cool, Margaret. I hope you place! ME LIKES.
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:02:00 PM
I enjoyed the well penned poem
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