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Barefoot, I romp on flush of evening’s bliss when gangmates act as allies to this trance, my hair ruffling with the sashay of leaves as if summer air wafts tunes to enhance the fine chorus of birdsong’s melody-- among cobblestones from old hometown's alley. And there I find childlike spirit's release this body darting in malleable form; while woodland becomes a new universe bathed in luscious dew the glint of stars,warm-- my pulse rising to catch north- winds recede that giggles bounce, pop like a dancing reed! Caren Krutsinger's Pure Childlike Fun And Enthusiasm

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Date: 11/15/2014 7:28:00 AM
I have to fav this one! I still romp barefoot through the woods, the water, the snow. The child in me reigns supreme much of the time.
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:11:00 PM
I love this carefree, happy write. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/14/2014 6:38:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win !!
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:45:00 PM
Nette, the spirit of youth really comes through with your words that carry so much imagery. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 11/14/2014 10:06:00 AM
You use your words with the most luscious, joyful voice imaginable ! Lovely!! Congratulations dear Nette!
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:50:00 AM
oh so enchanting a write nette many congrats on your win
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Date: 11/7/2014 9:50:00 AM
You took my spirit there with you with such ease and flowing lines. Gorgeous !!
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Date: 11/5/2014 8:49:00 PM
I feel like I stepped into a fairytale, joyous and innocent! I have always been inspired by the beauty of your poetry, Nette.....thanks for stopping by to welcome me back. It's been a tough year but I'm happy to be back. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/5/2014 1:15:00 PM
You are so alive with how you see life. No wonder, your poems startle the senses because you are forever fresh and not jaded.Gold for me, Nette!
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Date: 11/4/2014 11:56:00 PM
A world of wonder and innocence very well structured. How I wish we could always nurture our inner child! Impeccable diction, Nette.
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Date: 11/4/2014 11:42:00 PM
Brilliant pen, Nette. You are a child of magic and pure imagination!
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Date: 11/4/2014 8:53:00 PM
I've always admired how you harmonize your youthful liberty with natural wonder Nette. I thinkI'm saying that your heart is young, spirit liberated, and beauty a natural wonder. You have a very rare blend of style and substance genius. The way you reverse the senses in this poem is phenomenal to the discerning eye Nette. This poetry makes me feel young and wise. J.A.B.
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Date: 11/4/2014 5:05:00 PM
I danced right back in time with you, Nette! Enchanting as your pen took me to a time pure wonderment. I can't decide which images are my favorite however to do all these activities barefoot does show a pure trust in one's environment! Magical!
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Date: 11/4/2014 4:38:00 PM
Excellent!!!!
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