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Yesterday's Joyride

A body of chipped paint and red rust, A weathered windshield under the dust Steering wheel aims in one last turn, Dashboard suffers from many a sunburn Her cracked mirrors are still adjusted, Her upholstery is worn out and busted Seats tilted since the last time driven, Still positioned in an adjustment given Smashed headlights and dull chrome, Flat tires sunken into her final home Once a brand new beauty, now, junk, Only memories fill the empty trunk The road trips taken across the nation, Radio's still tuned to a favorite station She's over the hill and forced to stay, As yesterday's joyride eases into decay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 8/7/2022 6:49:00 AM
I love your joyride mem'ries amazingly portrayed in your awesome couplet my dear friend Kelly. As a whole, I love this poem a lot. Thanks for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/6/2022 9:58:00 AM
Thank you once again, my friend.
Date: 8/3/2022 11:25:00 AM
Ahhh!! I can feel the attachment to the old car you enjoyed so much. Very descriptive and expressive work. Sara
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/9/2022 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 8/3/2022 2:49:00 AM
Ah, yes, she remembers those good ol’ days well. Nicely done, Kelly. Hmm, this could be a metaphor for me… :). John
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/3/2022 10:23:00 AM
Thank you John
Date: 7/21/2022 6:39:00 PM
Oh the memories, there are so many cars I miss for one reason or another. The old beetle that died on me in the mountains 200 miles from home. The little three cylinder Chevy Sprint standard shift, so much fun to drive and 53 MPG over 40 years ago, and of course my favorite, Chevy convertible. How I miss driving with the top down. Thanks for the nice write and memories, Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/24/2022 3:14:00 PM
You're welcome James. I'm glad that this brought back some fond memories for you!
Date: 7/21/2022 6:47:00 AM
Those were the days, Kelly love your joyride, and the memories.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/21/2022 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Harry

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