Yesterday

Yesterday, the blue green just before sunset was All around me...invading My memories Troubles disappeared, they Seemed to vanish beyond the horizon So Far Away... Now, as lavender leaks to black It Looks As Though stars are born.. They're one by one rising, as if Here To Stay.....forever Oh what peace.. I Believe I could loose myself In your blue green eyes.. Yesterday, the sunset invaded my memories......... 2-1-2014 ©Donna Jones

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/7/2014 9:23:00 PM

Hi Donna; This poem is beautiful. I just loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us.... Lucilla

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2014 5:07:00 PM

Very romantic work..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the visits to my page..How are you doing?..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/6/2014 4:01:00 PM

this is lovely Donna, so visual,love it...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2014 3:52:00 PM

soupmail.

Austin Eseke

Date: 2/6/2014 1:40:00 PM

NICE POEM.hope for your visit and comments on my poems.Thanks and bye

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2014 8:42:00 AM

hey, donna. I have had no time lately for poetry comments these past few days, but just wanted to come by and say hello . I am waiting for a new poem from you.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/6/2014 1:38:00 PM

Hello andrea----thanks for stopping...ive been busy tooin this bad and cold weather with my animals..on top of tthe flu...I'll work on that new poem....:-) :-)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/6/2014 8:13:00 AM

This one is amazingly creative! This will become a classic like the original Yesterday.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/6/2014 1:28:00 PM

Oh Monterey,,,that is so very nice..thank you very much...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/5/2014 9:26:00 AM

Good morning Donna, I have been busy but well. Getting ready for my trip to Mexico. Leaving tomorrow. Thanks for asking. How have you been?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2014 9:55:00 PM

Yep just a short get away to help shorten the winter.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/5/2014 9:52:00 PM

I've just been busy Caring for my animals in this brutal cold weather but fine..:-) :-) :-) ..are you going on vacation? I don't keep up much..anyway be safe

Vera Duggan

Date: 2/3/2014 6:34:00 PM

I just loved this poem Donna, once again you have excelled yourself. Vera

Donna Jones
Date: 2/5/2014 9:47:00 PM

Oh thank you Vera..so nice of you..it has been so cold here...all I get done is take care of my animals..sorry for the late response

Tim Ryerson

Date: 2/2/2014 11:08:00 PM

Your poetry is growing by leaps and bounds. SO glad you are feeling better. Apparently you have heeded Dr. Tim's advice...

Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2014 8:10:00 AM

Oh yeah....hot toddy ...:-) vitamin c twist...finally some rest..thanks for stopping by Tim....appreciate it ..

Chris Boskovski

Date: 2/2/2014 10:08:00 PM

Wow Donna this is a very impressive poem! I love how you wrote it, very interesting. I would love to have blue and green eyes, I'm stuck with brown! uggh! lol Lovely write! xoxo :)

Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Chris....glad you enjoyed....however...brown eyes are beautiful as well...:-) ..just beeing able to see is beautiful..:-) :-) I'm always happy to see youve stopped by...thanks....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/2/2014 3:49:00 PM

Wow Donna a fine example! So nice to have a moment to read your verse. Light & Love

Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2014 7:51:00 AM

Thank you for taking time Debbie...very nice of you.:-)

Ken Carroll

Date: 2/2/2014 3:14:00 PM

Awesome write Donna!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/3/2014 7:50:00 AM

Thanks so much Ken....good to see ya

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2014 12:20:00 PM

It will be cool to see the winners of this contest. Yours is one of my favorites in it.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 12:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/2/2014 11:57:00 AM

very creative, donns! you took this somewhere out of the park!... you are incredible like the sunset!... more!.. huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 12:39:00 PM

Ahh..that's a nice thing to say..:-) :-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/2/2014 10:39:00 AM

This is one of my favorites so far for the contest. I like how you interpreted the contest. Stunning, stunning, Stunning!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 12:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Richard.....how ya been?

Christine Phillips

Date: 2/2/2014 8:31:00 AM

Yesterday, the blue green just before sunset was "All around me...invading My memories Troubles disappeared... They Seemed to vanish beyond the horizon So... Far... Away..." This is a beautiful verse, but it would flow better if you did not have all these pauses

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 12:38:00 PM

Thanks Christine....I took some of them out..appreciate the help...:-) :-)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/2/2014 4:05:00 AM

This is great Donna , wishing gl in the contest. Kayod5.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 12:19:00 PM

Thank you very much....:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2014 10:40:00 PM

hey, you came up with a great way to work in those more difficult words by just doing one-word lines. This is a very beautiful acrostic of words!!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 11:17:00 AM

Hi Andrea....thanks....I'm not sure this meets contest regulations or not but was my only idea....appreciate the nice reply..

Janica Williams

Date: 2/1/2014 9:31:00 PM

This poem is a very inspiring piece of work.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 11:07:00 AM

Thank you very much...

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/1/2014 9:22:00 PM

Wow, this is totally awesome my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a glorious piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2014 11:00:00 AM

Hey Russell....so good to see ya....thanks so much....